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Friday, March 11, 2011

Extending Ideas

This week in story writing, we have been working on writing stories with more than one idea. Taulima and Ubaid both wrote very good stories with two ideas! Here are their videos.


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  1. UnknownMarch 11, 2011 at 7:22 AM

    Well done Taulima and Ubaid, you both wrote very good stories. I was very impressed by how you recorded your stories onto the computer together, all by yourselves.

    Miss Lepou

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  2. Wally the giraffeMarch 11, 2011 at 7:24 AM

    Great stories Ubaid and Taulima. I could see you finding a lot of words for your stories on your word cards. Keep up the great work.

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  3. KatieMarch 11, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    I liked your stories.

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  4. avantikaMarch 11, 2011 at 8:58 AM

    I really liked your stories.

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  5. LovedayMarch 11, 2011 at 8:58 AM

    What kind of games did you play with your neighbours Taulima?

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  6. HayzelMarch 11, 2011 at 8:58 AM

    I liked how you read your stories fast, not slow.

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  7. rooshanMarch 11, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    You read your stories very fast.

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  8. AydinMarch 11, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    Awesome stories. You read very nicely.

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  9. Farhaan from C1March 11, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    I think you write good stories.

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  10. Nancy from C1March 11, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    You're stories are very interesting. You are brave for reading carefully.

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  11. HelenMarch 11, 2011 at 8:31 PM

    Great stories,you read them so well and you recorded them. Amazing!
    I haven't seen a rainbow in a long time Ubaid, you reminded me how beautiful they are.
    Taulima how old are you neighbours?
    Do they go to your school?

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