On Friday, our teddy bears came to school for the day. They did everything with us: Jump Jam, assembly, reading books and they were the special guests at our annual Teddy Bears Picnic.
Before the day ended, our super scribe Hayzel, decided to write about her day.
We had a great day even though the sun wasn't shining! Mr Blue told me he wants to have a picnic everyday.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Hayzel. I like how you ended your story with a question!
Miss Lepou
Lovely story Hayzel.
ReplyDeleteI wish I was a teddy bear so I could have come to your picnic.
That was a great picnic, A4. Lots of fun and lots of delicious food to eat. Awesome story, Hayzel. I still like to hold my teddy sometimes and give him a hug.
ReplyDeleteA4, I like your song and it makes me dance.
ReplyDeleteI like your story Hayzel
ReplyDeleteI like when you read your story fast.
ReplyDeleteI hope our teddies had a good day.
ReplyDeleteYou read your story very clearly.
ReplyDeleteI like it how you didn't read your story like a robot.
ReplyDeletehayzel you are a good writer
ReplyDeleteI like your story hayzel and how you read fast. i wish i was a you hayzel because so i can write a a good story and i wish i was a teacher like miss lapou.
ReplyDeleteI like the teddy bears parade. It was fun dancing with my teddy bear.
ReplyDeleteI like the music in this video.
ReplyDeleteTHE MUSIC WAS COOL
ReplyDeleteI really loved your song. How did you make up that song? I really want to visit your class some time. Can I?
ReplyDeleteHi Sharon, that song is a very old song. We think Ms Mulrennan might have been singing it when she was at school. You are welcome to come and visit us anytime Sharon.
ReplyDeleteNice story Hayzel. Cute photo with the teddybear.
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