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Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Jarred's First Story

Jarred has written a story about all of the leaves on his roof. This is his first video on the blog!


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10 comments:

  1. HelenJune 22, 2011 at 6:48 PM

    Very good story Jarred. Did your Dad have to get up on the roof to clean the leaves?

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  2. Ms MulrennanJune 22, 2011 at 8:34 PM

    Good writing and reading Jarred. How dod you get up on the roof?

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  3. JarredJune 23, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    Hi Helen and Ms Mulrennan
    My dad didn't come up and help. We used a ladder to get up on the roof.

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  4. LeilahJune 23, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    I like your leaves.

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  5. UbaidJune 23, 2011 at 9:03 AM

    If the man goes up on the roof, the man might break the roof.

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  6. TaulimaJune 23, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    I liked Jarred's colours in his pictures.

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  7. JordynJune 23, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    I liked your picture because it was colourful.

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  8. AmalaniJune 23, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    That was a cool story.

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  9. AshleyJune 23, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    I liked your story.

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  10. VickyJune 23, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    What happened next?

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