Were you scared of the lion?
I liked your story.
Were you scared of the zebra?
The lion has got sharp teeth.
That was a good story.
I like how Jazmine spoke clearly, but she has to learn to not move.
Was that your imagination? What happened to you?
I like her story, but you need to practice reading more clearly.
The lion did not eat me because my mum came.
Wow that would have been terrifying! What were you feeding the zebra Jazimine?
The lion is roaring at you.
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Were you scared of the lion?
ReplyDeleteI liked your story.
ReplyDeleteWere you scared of the zebra?
ReplyDeleteThe lion has got sharp teeth.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good story.
ReplyDeleteI like how Jazmine spoke clearly, but she has to learn to not move.
ReplyDeleteWas that your imagination? What happened to you?
ReplyDeleteI like her story, but you need to practice reading more clearly.
ReplyDeleteThe lion did not eat me because my mum came.
ReplyDeleteWow that would have been terrifying! What were you feeding the zebra Jazimine?
ReplyDeleteThe lion is roaring at you.
ReplyDelete