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Thursday, June 9, 2011

The Zebra

Sawanpreet has written a fantastic story about a zebra at the zoo. He has also created an illustration on Kid Pix.


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11 comments:

  1. tuanJune 9, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    I liked Sawanpreet's story

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  2. TaulimaJune 9, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    I like how he read it nice and clearly.

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  3. PakiJune 9, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    I like how you didn't read your story like a robot.

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  4. LeilahJune 9, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    I like your story.

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  5. AloysiusJune 9, 2011 at 9:03 AM

    I like how you read your story fast.

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  6. ItaliaJune 9, 2011 at 9:03 AM

    I like your story.

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  7. UnknownJune 9, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    I like your story because you read it fast, but you were moving all around.

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  8. UnknownJune 9, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    We like how you had 3 ideas in your story.

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  9. RajpreetJune 10, 2011 at 9:08 AM

    I like how you read your story in a clear voice.

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  10. A1 kidsJune 10, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    We liked your story Sawanpreet! We wonder what else zebras eat.

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  11. HelenJune 13, 2011 at 8:43 PM

    Good story Sawanpreet. I think Zebras are really cool. Do they eat anything else besides grass?

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