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Saturday, June 18, 2011

The Rainbow

Jordyn has published her first story. Take a look!



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10 comments:

  1. Miss MacJune 20, 2011 at 7:14 AM

    Hi Jordyn, you did a great job reading your story on the blog for the first time. What colours did you see on the rainbow?

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  2. JordynJune 20, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    Hi Miss Mac
    My mum saw green, blue, pink and orange.

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  3. AloysiusJune 20, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    I like your rainbow

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  4. LeilahJune 20, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    I like your rainbow because it is colourful.

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  5. Jarred and UbaidJune 20, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    we liked Jordyn's rainbow because she did it really colourful.

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  6. LeilahJune 20, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    I like hre story

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  7. Ms MulrennanJune 20, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    L like your colourful pcture, Jordyn. You read your story in a very clear voice. Well done!

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  8. Room14June 20, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    We like your rainbow picture Jordyn
    From Room 14

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  9. HelenJune 20, 2011 at 4:38 PM

    Hi Jordyn, that was fabulous reading. I like looking at rainbows just like your mum.

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  10. AnonymousJune 21, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    Great work Jordy, we are very proud of you!! Love Mum and Dad

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