I liked when Shane said, Ahhhh!
I liked when Gavin was running away.
I liked the monster that got Gavin.
Gavin's story was great.
I liked the part when the monster was chasing him and they were in a forest.
I like when he said the words great.
I liked your backgrounds.
I liked the monster and he put his words together good.
I like when Shane went ahhh.
I like Gavin's story.
Gavins story was great
I liked how Shane helped Gavin.
I liked when the monster chased Gavin.
I liked when Gavin said Ahhhhh!
your story was great
you put your words together gavin.
i liked when Gavin was running away
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I liked when Shane said, Ahhhh!
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ReplyDeleteI liked the monster that got Gavin.
ReplyDeleteGavin's story was great.
ReplyDeleteI liked the part when the monster was chasing him and they were in a forest.
ReplyDeleteI like when he said the words great.
ReplyDeleteI liked your backgrounds.
ReplyDeleteI liked the monster and he put his words together good.
ReplyDeleteI like when Shane went ahhh.
ReplyDeleteI like Gavin's story.
ReplyDeleteGavins story was great
ReplyDeleteI liked how Shane helped Gavin.
ReplyDeleteI liked when the monster chased Gavin.
ReplyDeleteI liked when Gavin said Ahhhhh!
ReplyDeleteyour story was great
ReplyDeleteyou put your words together gavin.
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