Monday, November 19, 2012

The Monster, By Gavin

Here is a Puppet Pal story by Gavin about a monster who was chasing him. Shane helped Gavin to make the puppet show by moving some of the puppets and adding sound effects.


17 comments:

  1. I liked when Shane said, Ahhhh!

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  2. I liked when Gavin was running away.

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  3. I liked the monster that got Gavin.

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  4. Gavin's story was great.

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  5. I liked the part when the monster was chasing him and they were in a forest.

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  6. I like when he said the words great.

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  7. I liked your backgrounds.

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  8. I liked the monster and he put his words together good.

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  9. Natalia and Jamilah.November 20, 2012 at 1:52 PM

    I like when Shane went ahhh.

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  10. I like Gavin's story.

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  11. Gavins story was great

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  12. I liked how Shane helped Gavin.

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  13. I liked when the monster chased Gavin.

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  14. I liked when Gavin said Ahhhhh!

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  15. you put your words together gavin.

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  16. i liked when Gavin was running away

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