Friday, March 11, 2011

Extending Ideas

This week in story writing, we have been working on writing stories with more than one idea. Taulima and Ubaid both wrote very good stories with two ideas! Here are their videos.

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11 comments:

Room A4 said...

Well done Taulima and Ubaid, you both wrote very good stories. I was very impressed by how you recorded your stories onto the computer together, all by yourselves.

Miss Lepou

Wally the giraffe said...

Great stories Ubaid and Taulima. I could see you finding a lot of words for your stories on your word cards. Keep up the great work.

Katie said...

I liked your stories.

avantika said...

I really liked your stories.

Loveday said...

What kind of games did you play with your neighbours Taulima?

Hayzel said...

I liked how you read your stories fast, not slow.

rooshan said...

You read your stories very fast.

Aydin said...

Awesome stories. You read very nicely.

Farhaan from C1 said...

I think you write good stories.

Nancy from C1 said...

You're stories are very interesting. You are brave for reading carefully.

Helen said...

Great stories,you read them so well and you recorded them. Amazing!
I haven't seen a rainbow in a long time Ubaid, you reminded me how beautiful they are.
Taulima how old are you neighbours?
Do they go to your school?