Very good story Jarred. Did your Dad have to get up on the roof to clean the leaves?
Good writing and reading Jarred. How dod you get up on the roof?
Hi Helen and Ms MulrennanMy dad didn't come up and help. We used a ladder to get up on the roof.
I like your leaves.
If the man goes up on the roof, the man might break the roof.
I liked Jarred's colours in his pictures.
I liked your picture because it was colourful.
That was a cool story.
I liked your story.
What happened next?
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