Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Jarred's First Story

Jarred has written a story about all of the leaves on his roof. This is his first video on the blog!


video

10 comments:

Helen said...

Very good story Jarred. Did your Dad have to get up on the roof to clean the leaves?

Ms Mulrennan said...

Good writing and reading Jarred. How dod you get up on the roof?

Jarred said...

Hi Helen and Ms Mulrennan
My dad didn't come up and help. We used a ladder to get up on the roof.

Leilah said...

I like your leaves.

Ubaid said...

If the man goes up on the roof, the man might break the roof.

Taulima said...

I liked Jarred's colours in his pictures.

Jordyn said...

I liked your picture because it was colourful.

Amalani said...

That was a cool story.

Ashley said...

I liked your story.

Vicky said...

What happened next?