Monday, June 13, 2011

The Shark

Taulima has written a story about a shark. She has illustrated her story using Kid Pix.


video

12 comments:

Helen said...

Poor old fish, did you help it Taulima or did you swim for your life?

Krisha and Leilani said...

I liked your story a lot. The fish must of been fearful.

Shubhreet said...

Did the shark eat the fish?

Taulima said...

Hi Helen
I helped the fish, I pulled the shark's mouth up so the fish could swim away.

Paavitr said...

Did the shark catch you, Taulima?

Jarred said...

I liked your picture because you did it nicely on Kid Pix.

Leilah said...

I liked your shark picture.

Aloysius said...

I ;liked the real shark on the video.

Avantika said...

I like her story and she stayed still and read it.

Italia said...

I like how Taulima didn't read like a robot.

Room 14 said...

What a wonderful long story. I loved the way you read with expression. Mrs Eden Richmond School Nelson

Leilah said...

I like your shark.