Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Flowers, by Jordyn

Here is an illustration and story by Jordyn.


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17 comments:

Leilah said...

I liked Jordyn's story because she it clearly.

Sawanpreet said...

i liked Jordyn's movie

Jazmine said...

I like how she didn't read her story like a robot.

Taulima said...

I liked how Jordyn stood still in the first place.

Gurleen said...

I liked the flowers in the picture.

Shane said...

I liked how she was standing properly.

Aloysius said...

I liked the flowers at the beginning

Tuan said...

I liked the sun in Jordyn;s picture.

Merciful said...

I like Jordyn's flower.

Avantika said...

Jordyn read her story clearly and she didn't read it like a robot.

Ubaid and Crystalive said...

I liked Jordyn's background in her picture

Room A4 said...

I liked Jordyn's story. - Jarred
I liked Jordyn't flowers in the sun. Zechariah

Noelani said...

Did the flower turn into a meatball?

Ennie said...

I like Jordyn's story because it was cool and Jordyn's story was amazing.

Nancy said...

Did Jordyn pick up the flower? Did she pick up a pink flower?

Amalani said...

Did you pick one of the flowers?

Helen said...

That's a nice story Jordyn. There are lots of flowers around now because it is spring. Were the flowers in your garden at school?