Hi Avantika, I liked your story and your volcano looked amazing! Did it take you long to make it?
Was it a ghost who messed up your sandpit?
Did you make a big hole and did you see something in it?
Did the volcano make you dead?
I like your story.
Avantika you have an awesome story!
I loved your story and your vois.
There is no lava inside your volcano.
I liked how Avantika read her story, but she has to read it faster.
I like when Avantika didn't read like a robot.
I liked how the video had a volcano coming up.
I liked the volcano in the video
I liked how the fire was coming out of the volcano.
I like how they made the volcano out of sand..
I liked the volcano - ShaneI liked the volcano because someone was drinking the volcano and the volcano said, "Stop you're making me empty." - Ubaid
The volcano had a big hole and they were making it bigger.
How great that you get to have a sand pit at your school! Your story was very interesting, Avantika. Great job! How did you make your volcano?Mrs. S
What a cool idea Avantika, I hope noone fell down your volcano.You're lucky to have a new sandpit it looks like lots of fun.
I liked your VOLCANO Avantika.It looked really deep!!!!!!!!!!!!
what did you see in it
were you sad when the person messed it up
Hi Avantika i like your story .......But one question is the volcano going to blow up? If it is i'm scared HIDE THE VOLCANO IS GOING TO BLOW UP !!!!!!!!!!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By the way your story was wonderful
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