Monday, November 14, 2011

The Volcano, By Avantika

We love making things in the new sandpit at our school.


Avantika made a volcano with Merciful and she took a photo of it.


Here is Avantika's story.

video

22 comments:

Miss Mac said...

Hi Avantika, I liked your story and your volcano looked amazing! Did it take you long to make it?

Paavitr said...

Was it a ghost who messed up your sandpit?

Amalani said...

Did you make a big hole and did you see something in it?

Sandy said...

Did the volcano make you dead?

Kaya said...

I like your story.

Ofa said...

Avantika you have an awesome story!

Alofa C1 said...

I loved your story and your vois.

Sawanpreet said...

There is no lava inside your volcano.

Taulima said...

I liked how Avantika read her story, but she has to read it faster.

Italia said...

I like when Avantika didn't read like a robot.

Paki said...

I liked how the video had a volcano coming up.

Jordyn said...

I liked the volcano in the video

Jazmine said...

I liked how the fire was coming out of the volcano.

Aloysius said...

I like how they made the volcano out of sand..

Room A4 said...

I liked the volcano - Shane
I liked the volcano because someone was drinking the volcano and the volcano said, "Stop you're making me empty." - Ubaid

Zech said...

The volcano had a big hole and they were making it bigger.

Kind Kids said...

How great that you get to have a sand pit at your school! Your story was very interesting, Avantika. Great job! How did you make your volcano?
Mrs. S

Helen said...

What a cool idea Avantika, I hope noone fell down your volcano.
You're lucky to have a new sandpit it looks like lots of fun.

Muskaan From C1 said...

I liked your VOLCANO Avantika.It looked really deep!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aryan from C1 said...

what did you see in it

Kevin from C1 said...

were you sad when the person messed it up

Savanya C6 said...

Hi Avantika i like your story .......But one question is the volcano going to blow up? If it is i'm scared HIDE THE VOLCANO IS GOING TO BLOW UP !!!!!!!!!!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By the way your story was wonderful