Wednesday, December 7, 2011

A Day with Mr McGee

It is almost the end of 2011 and throughout the year, we have developed some very good writing skills. Here is a story by Avantika, about a day with Mr McGee. Her story has a very clear beginning, middle and end. Avantika has illustrated her story using KidPix.

13 comments:

Jordyn said...

I liked the pictures.

Taulima said...

I like how Avantika read it nice and clearly.

Merciful said...

I like when Avantika read her story

Tuan said...

I like how Avantika drew her pictures.

Aloysius said...

I liked the cloud white and the green background.

Jazmine said...

I liked Avantika's story, it was nice.

Italia said...

I like when Avantika filled up the background.

Leilah said...

That was a good story.

Avantika said...

I liked my clouds and the grass because it looked nice int the video.

Jarred said...

She didn't read like a robot.

Zech said...

I liked Avantika's Mr McGee.

Mohit said...

I liked the background.

Room 14 said...

What a clever story writer you are Avantika and you are a very good reader as well. Keep up the good work. Happy holidays.
From Mrs eden
Richmond Primary. Nelson.