Friday, June 8, 2012

Our Trip Stories

We have been writing some fantastic stories about our trip to the Botanic Gardens last Friday. Here are stories written by Hanlin and Soane about their experience. 




19 comments:

Tihei said...

Did yous have a nice trip there.

kanye said...

I think those are cool stories.

Gavin said...

I liked Soane's picture.

Nataria said...

I like how they read it nicely.

Soane said...

I like it, it is awesome like a transformer.

Shane said...

I liked Soane and Hanlin's stories.

Zech said...

I liked Soane's story because it is good.

Sonya said...

I liked their pictures.

Sammy said...

I liked Soane's story.

Naki said...

Hanlin and Soane's stories are awesome.

Miss Mac said...

Hi, I enjoyed your stories. Hanlin you had lots of ideas in your story, well done. Did you enjoy going on the bus?

Sana said...

I like stories.

Andy said...

I like the picture.

Zia said...

I like the stories.

Jiya said...

I like the pictures.

Jarred said...

I like your stories.

Helen said...

Wow a tiger,how exciting. Were you scared of the tiger?

Helen said...

Good story Hamlin,I like the flowers at the botanical gardens too.

Ms Mulrennan said...

They are great stories Hanlin and Soane. You are both working very hard at story writing time - thinking of great ideas to write about and interesting words to use.
Well done, both of you.