Wednesday, August 29, 2012

A Scary Sight, By Nataria

Nataria looked out of her window and guess what she saw?


16 comments:

Miss Lepou said...

Your picture was colourful.

Gavin said...

Your picture was good.

Helen said...

Wow how lucky are you Nataria it must have been amazing to see the volcano. Did you smell sulphur in the air and did you get any ash in your hair ?

Mrs Des Forges said...

Cool story Nataria, or should I say hot story!

William said...

Nataria's story was cool.

Natalia said...

Nataria's picture is great because it is colourful.

Sammy said...

I liked the lava flying out of the volcano.

Sonya said...

Nataria was reading nicely to us.

Sonya said...

Nataria was reading nicely to us.

Naki said...

Nataria's story was very good.

Hanlin said...

Nataria's story was great because her picture was colourful.

Nataria said...

I was very scared of the ash.

Gavin said...

you read your story very clearly.

Nataria said...

it was a good day about me in that story and it was good all by myse lf

katie said...

I like it.

maddy said...

i like nataria