Fantastic story and picture Gavin. Did you find the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow?
Great story and picture Gavin. Your reading was very clear. You have been working very hard at storywriting time. Well done.
This is a good story, Gavin.
Gavin had a nice story and I like his voice.Evile
Gavin's story was fantastic.
Gavin's story was great that is why I liked it.
Gavin's story was great.
Gavin wrote his story well and put his words together.
I lired your story gavin
I liked your story
that was a good story
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