I liked when Shane said, Ahhhh!
I liked when Gavin was running away.
I liked the monster that got Gavin.
Gavin's story was great.
I liked the part when the monster was chasing him and they were in a forest.
I like when he said the words great.
I liked your backgrounds.
I liked the monster and he put his words together good.
I like when Shane went ahhh.
I like Gavin's story.
Gavins story was great
I liked how Shane helped Gavin.
I liked when the monster chased Gavin.
I liked when Gavin said Ahhhhh!
your story was great
you put your words together gavin.
i liked when Gavin was running away
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