Yesterday Katie, Hayzel and Loveday decided to write stories about their holidays to share with the class on the blog.
What did you do during your school holidays? Leave us a comment.
8 comments:
Miss Lepou
said...
Great stories girls. Hayzel and Katie, you sequenced the ideas in your stories very well. You are very good at reading fluently Loveday. All of you have set a great example of how to read fluently and clearly for the rest of the class.
What wonderful story writing girls and you all read your stories clearly for the blog. Who was the party for Katie? I went on a camel ride in my holidays, I thought it might have been Alice the camel but his name was Jimmy. Miss Mac
8 comments:
Great stories girls. Hayzel and Katie, you sequenced the ideas in your stories very well. You are very good at reading fluently Loveday. All of you have set a great example of how to read fluently and clearly for the rest of the class.
What wonderful story writing girls and you all read your stories clearly for the blog. Who was the party for Katie? I went on a camel ride in my holidays, I thought it might have been Alice the camel but his name was Jimmy.
Miss Mac
I liked your story
Did you know that Stu has got a new cage?
Hi Mac, I was going to my Grandma's party.
The stories are nice.
Katie, why did you go home with your brother?
Hi Loveday, I liked you video because you had a clear voice.
Hi Hayzel, you looked really good doing your video.
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