This week in story writing, we have been working on writing stories with more than one idea. Taulima and Ubaid both wrote very good stories with two ideas! Here are their videos.
Well done Taulima and Ubaid, you both wrote very good stories. I was very impressed by how you recorded your stories onto the computer together, all by yourselves.
Great stories,you read them so well and you recorded them. Amazing! I haven't seen a rainbow in a long time Ubaid, you reminded me how beautiful they are. Taulima how old are you neighbours? Do they go to your school?
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Well done Taulima and Ubaid, you both wrote very good stories. I was very impressed by how you recorded your stories onto the computer together, all by yourselves.
Miss Lepou
Great stories Ubaid and Taulima. I could see you finding a lot of words for your stories on your word cards. Keep up the great work.
I liked your stories.
I really liked your stories.
What kind of games did you play with your neighbours Taulima?
I liked how you read your stories fast, not slow.
You read your stories very fast.
Awesome stories. You read very nicely.
I think you write good stories.
You're stories are very interesting. You are brave for reading carefully.
Great stories,you read them so well and you recorded them. Amazing!
I haven't seen a rainbow in a long time Ubaid, you reminded me how beautiful they are.
Taulima how old are you neighbours?
Do they go to your school?
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