I like the bright colours you used for your picture.Miss Lepou
I liked your story.
It was nice to see the picture of the dolphin.
Yes we like dolphins because they are friendly and kind. Dolphins can save you from a shark. They can also help us to breathe in the water.
I like playing with dolphins.
I like dolphins because it does tricks and when the shark comes, the dolphin goes away.
The dolphin saves people. The girl jumps out of the water and its cold and deep.
That was clear reading when you were talking about your dolphin.
You are very lucky to have a kind friend.
What a fantastic story. I have seen dolphins swimming around a boat and they are beautiful. You are one lucky girl to go swimming with one.I like your picture to.
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I like the bright colours you used for your picture.
Miss Lepou
I liked your story.
It was nice to see the picture of the dolphin.
Yes we like dolphins because they are friendly and kind. Dolphins can save you from a shark. They can also help us to breathe in the water.
I like playing with dolphins.
I like dolphins because it does tricks and when the shark comes, the dolphin goes away.
The dolphin saves people. The girl jumps out of the water and its cold and deep.
That was clear reading when you were talking about your dolphin.
You are very lucky to have a kind friend.
What a fantastic story. I have seen dolphins swimming around a boat and they are beautiful. You are one lucky girl to go swimming with one.
I like your picture to.
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