Wednesday, June 29, 2011

The Lion and the Zebra

This is Jazmine's first story on the blog. It is about a zebra and a lion. Look at her great drawing!




11 comments:

Rohit said...

Were you scared of the lion?

Aliyaah said...

I liked your story.

Ofa said...

Were you scared of the zebra?

George said...

The lion has got sharp teeth.

Tuan said...

That was a good story.

Taulima said...

I like how Jazmine spoke clearly, but she has to learn to not move.

Aloysius said...

Was that your imagination? What happened to you?

Avantika said...

I like her story, but you need to practice reading more clearly.

Jazmine said...

The lion did not eat me because my mum came.

Helen said...

Wow that would have been terrifying! What were you feeding the zebra Jazimine?

Tarik said...

The lion is roaring at you.