Poor old fish, did you help it Taulima or did you swim for your life?
I liked your story a lot. The fish must of been fearful.
Did the shark eat the fish?
Hi HelenI helped the fish, I pulled the shark's mouth up so the fish could swim away.
Did the shark catch you, Taulima?
I liked your picture because you did it nicely on Kid Pix.
I liked your shark picture.
I ;liked the real shark on the video.
I like her story and she stayed still and read it.
I like how Taulima didn't read like a robot.
What a wonderful long story. I loved the way you read with expression. Mrs Eden Richmond School Nelson
I like your shark.
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Poor old fish, did you help it Taulima or did you swim for your life?
I liked your story a lot. The fish must of been fearful.
Did the shark eat the fish?
Hi Helen
I helped the fish, I pulled the shark's mouth up so the fish could swim away.
Did the shark catch you, Taulima?
I liked your picture because you did it nicely on Kid Pix.
I liked your shark picture.
I ;liked the real shark on the video.
I like her story and she stayed still and read it.
I like how Taulima didn't read like a robot.
What a wonderful long story. I loved the way you read with expression. Mrs Eden Richmond School Nelson
I like your shark.
Post a Comment