Thursday, June 9, 2011

The Zebra

Sawanpreet has written a fantastic story about a zebra at the zoo. He has also created an illustration on Kid Pix.



11 comments:

tuan said...

I liked Sawanpreet's story

Taulima said...

I like how he read it nice and clearly.

Paki said...

I like how you didn't read your story like a robot.

Leilah said...

I like your story.

Aloysius said...

I like how you read your story fast.

Italia said...

I like your story.

Unknown said...

I like your story because you read it fast, but you were moving all around.

Unknown said...

We like how you had 3 ideas in your story.

Rajpreet said...

I like how you read your story in a clear voice.

A1 kids said...

We liked your story Sawanpreet! We wonder what else zebras eat.

Helen said...

Good story Sawanpreet. I think Zebras are really cool. Do they eat anything else besides grass?