You must be a fast runner to beatthe lion. Well done.From Mrs Eden nad Room 14
Great story Crystalive, you have become such a good independent writer!
Hi Crystalive, I love the way you read your story so clearly. Why was the lion hiding in the tree?
I like Crystalive's picture beacuse it is nice.Gurleen A4
I like Crystalive's story because she read it nice and clear. She was standing straight.Avantika A4
You have a very nice voice .Your story was also interesting.
I like your topic and you had read it in a big clear voice.
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You must be a fast runner to beatthe lion. Well done.
From Mrs Eden nad Room 14
Great story Crystalive, you have become such a good independent writer!
Hi Crystalive, I love the way you read your story so clearly. Why was the lion hiding in the tree?
I like Crystalive's picture beacuse it is nice.
Gurleen A4
I like Crystalive's story because she read it nice and clear. She was standing straight.
Avantika A4
You have a very nice voice .Your story was also interesting.
I like your topic and you had read it in a big clear voice.
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