Monday, November 21, 2011

The Pig, By Merciful

Merciful is making great progress in storywriting. Here is a story she wrote about a pig.




10 comments:

Anonymous said...

What lovely reading!

Jazmine said...

I like her pig in her picture.

Tuan said...

Merciful read a little bit too slow.

Jordyn said...

I like how Merciful didn't read like a robot.

Jarred said...

I liked Merciful's story because her story was funny.

Avantika said...

That was a good story.

Noelani said...

Did the pig eat the other pig?

Ofa said...

Did the pig got mud on his back and his hands and his tail?

Helen said...

Hello Merciful, what a nice story, you must have seen lots of animals at the zoo. Your picture is great.

Avantika said...

I like Your story