It is almost the end of 2011 and throughout the year, we have developed some very good writing skills. Here is a story by Avantika, about a day with Mr McGee. Her story has a very clear beginning, middle and end. Avantika has illustrated her story using KidPix.
13 comments:
I liked the pictures.
I like how Avantika read it nice and clearly.
I like when Avantika read her story
I like how Avantika drew her pictures.
I liked the cloud white and the green background.
I liked Avantika's story, it was nice.
I like when Avantika filled up the background.
That was a good story.
I liked my clouds and the grass because it looked nice int the video.
She didn't read like a robot.
I liked Avantika's Mr McGee.
I liked the background.
What a clever story writer you are Avantika and you are a very good reader as well. Keep up the good work. Happy holidays.
From Mrs eden
Richmond Primary. Nelson.
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