Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Poor Mr McGee

A4 have been reading a lot of books by Pamella Allen, about Mr McGee. We feel very sorry for him because he lives under a tree and bad things always happen to him. Here is a short animation of Mr McGee that we found on YouTube.
              
   

Here are two stories by Aloysius and Jazmine about Mr McGee.

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23 comments:

Leilah said...

Jazmine needs to read a bit faster.

Crystalive said...

I like how she didn't read like a robot

Jordyn said...

I like how Aloysius didn't move

Shane said...

I liked Aloysius story because it was cool.

Aloysius said...

I like how the bull hit Mr McGee in the bum.

Taulima said...

How did Aloysius get the picture from the book?

Avantika said...

I like how Aloysius read his story fast.

Tuan said...

I liked Aloysius' drawing

Muskaan and Manraj From C1 said...

That was a really funny adventure of Mr McGee on youtube!!!! I hope you guys can write funnier stories than Poor Mr McGee!!!!!!!

Learning Together said...

I love Mr McGee stories. My most favourite is Mr McGee and the biting flea. Have you read that one A4? It is sooooo funny!
From Mrs Kennedy
PS I love how your friends are giving you feedback to help you improve your learning. Say hi to Wally!

Miss Mac said...

Hi Aloysius and Jazmine, I like your stories. Jazmine, what do you think Mr McGee's favourite food is?
Miss Mac

Savannah said...

I liked your story Jazmine.

Gavin said...

I liked your story.

Rishaad said...

I like your story Jazmine because you read it quickly

Kaya said...

You have a good story Aloysius.

George said...

I like your story and your story is awesome.

Noelani said...

Did all of the bulls in the whole wide world come because you've got a red coat and some berries.

Vicky said...

Jazmine do you like to go to Mr McGee's house because he lives under a tree. Did you ask your Mum? If she said yes you can go and if she said no you can't go.

Hanlin said...

I like your story.

Anonymous said...

I like your story.

Ennie said...

I your story Aloysius and it was nice.

MARY said...

I LIKE YOU STORY ALOYSIUS

MARY AND KATIE said...

YOU ARE SO CLEVER ALOYSIUS