Oh dear! I wonder if the monkey could see you through the rain.I hope you can go another time so you can see all the animals.
I liked when you read it nice and fast.
I like Gurleen's picture because it is cool.
Gurleen needs to read a bit faster next time.
I like how Gurleen stayed still.
I liked her picture at the beginning
i liked her picture
We liked the monkey bars in her picture and the blue rain.
i liKed your story
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