What kind of beach was it?
Did the shark eat you?
Did the shark have sharp teeth?
What colour was the shark?
No the shark did not eat me, it had sharp teeth. It was grey.
I liked Manisha's picture.
Manisha's story was great.
I like how Manisha wrote her story nicely.
I liked her picture and her voice.
I like Manisha's story because it was great and I liked the shark.
Manisha's shark was great and was good.
I like Manisha's shark because she wrote it nicely.
I like Manisha's story.
It was scary at the end because you gave me a fright!
lovely story manisha; comment by manishas mum
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