Thursday, July 19, 2012

The Beach, by Manisha

Manisha went to the beach and guess what she saw? Here is her illustration and story.


15 comments:

Tarik said...

What kind of beach was it?

Paki said...

Did the shark eat you?

Jerome said...

Did the shark have sharp teeth?

Edrin said...

What colour was the shark?

Manisha said...

No the shark did not eat me, it had sharp teeth. It was grey.

Natalia said...

I liked Manisha's picture.

Zech said...

Manisha's story was great.

Nataria said...

I like how Manisha wrote her story nicely.

Shane said...

I liked her picture and her voice.

Soane said...

I like Manisha's story because it was great and I liked the shark.

Sonya said...

Manisha's shark was great and was good.

Evile said...

I like Manisha's shark because she wrote it nicely.

maddison said...

I like Manisha's story.

Deago A7 said...

It was scary at the end because you gave me a fright!

manishas parents said...

lovely story manisha;
comment by manishas mum