Wow Soane, what a great story. Did you run away too?
I liked the picture.Gavin
I liked that volcano exploding.
I liked Soane's picture.
I liked Soane's reading.
Soane's picture was great.
I like his story.
Soane's story is awesome.
Soane was reading it properly and he didn't move.Sonya
Soane put the words together all by himself and I liked the volcano.
Soane did his reading well because that was good work.
Soane's story was good.
How scary that must of been Soane, your friend wasn't very nice running away and leaving you alone!
awesome volcanoby mauri
that was a good story .
I like Soane
Hi Soane,We are Year 1 children at Springston School and we think your story about the volcano means you are very brave. We live where there have been a lot of earthquakes, but we are used to them now, and they hardly worry us at all. But volcanoes are scary! We think you read your story very well. We have been writing stories too, and you might like to read some of ours sometime. On our blog we are called Pathfinders.
Hi Pathfinders, thank you for your comment. It must be so scary to have earthquakes at your school. We will definitely check out your class blog.
HE Spk Goog
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