On Friday, our teddy bears came to school for the day. They did everything with us: Jump Jam, assembly, reading books and they were the special guests at our annual Teddy Bears Picnic.
Before the day ended, our super scribe Hayzel, decided to write about her day.
17 comments:
We had a great day even though the sun wasn't shining! Mr Blue told me he wants to have a picnic everyday.
Great story Hayzel. I like how you ended your story with a question!
Miss Lepou
Lovely story Hayzel.
I wish I was a teddy bear so I could have come to your picnic.
That was a great picnic, A4. Lots of fun and lots of delicious food to eat. Awesome story, Hayzel. I still like to hold my teddy sometimes and give him a hug.
A4, I like your song and it makes me dance.
I like your story Hayzel
I like when you read your story fast.
I hope our teddies had a good day.
You read your story very clearly.
I like it how you didn't read your story like a robot.
hayzel you are a good writer
I like your story hayzel and how you read fast. i wish i was a you hayzel because so i can write a a good story and i wish i was a teacher like miss lapou.
I like the teddy bears parade. It was fun dancing with my teddy bear.
I like the music in this video.
THE MUSIC WAS COOL
I really loved your song. How did you make up that song? I really want to visit your class some time. Can I?
Hi Sharon, that song is a very old song. We think Ms Mulrennan might have been singing it when she was at school. You are welcome to come and visit us anytime Sharon.
Nice story Hayzel. Cute photo with the teddybear.
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