A4 have been reading a lot of books by Pamella Allen, about Mr McGee. We feel very sorry for him because he lives under a tree and bad things always happen to him. Here is a short animation of Mr McGee that we found on YouTube.
Here are two stories by Aloysius and Jazmine about Mr McGee.
23 comments:
Jazmine needs to read a bit faster.
I like how she didn't read like a robot
I like how Aloysius didn't move
I liked Aloysius story because it was cool.
I like how the bull hit Mr McGee in the bum.
How did Aloysius get the picture from the book?
I like how Aloysius read his story fast.
I liked Aloysius' drawing
That was a really funny adventure of Mr McGee on youtube!!!! I hope you guys can write funnier stories than Poor Mr McGee!!!!!!!
I love Mr McGee stories. My most favourite is Mr McGee and the biting flea. Have you read that one A4? It is sooooo funny!
From Mrs Kennedy
PS I love how your friends are giving you feedback to help you improve your learning. Say hi to Wally!
Hi Aloysius and Jazmine, I like your stories. Jazmine, what do you think Mr McGee's favourite food is?
Miss Mac
I liked your story Jazmine.
I liked your story.
I like your story Jazmine because you read it quickly
You have a good story Aloysius.
I like your story and your story is awesome.
Did all of the bulls in the whole wide world come because you've got a red coat and some berries.
Jazmine do you like to go to Mr McGee's house because he lives under a tree. Did you ask your Mum? If she said yes you can go and if she said no you can't go.
I like your story.
I like your story.
I your story Aloysius and it was nice.
I LIKE YOU STORY ALOYSIUS
YOU ARE SO CLEVER ALOYSIUS
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