We have been writing some fantastic stories about our trip to the Botanic Gardens last Friday. Here are stories written by Hanlin and Soane about their experience.
They are great stories Hanlin and Soane. You are both working very hard at story writing time - thinking of great ideas to write about and interesting words to use. Well done, both of you.
19 comments:
Did yous have a nice trip there.
I think those are cool stories.
I liked Soane's picture.
I like how they read it nicely.
I like it, it is awesome like a transformer.
I liked Soane and Hanlin's stories.
I liked Soane's story because it is good.
I liked their pictures.
I liked Soane's story.
Hanlin and Soane's stories are awesome.
Hi, I enjoyed your stories. Hanlin you had lots of ideas in your story, well done. Did you enjoy going on the bus?
I like stories.
I like the picture.
I like the stories.
I like the pictures.
I like your stories.
Wow a tiger,how exciting. Were you scared of the tiger?
Good story Hamlin,I like the flowers at the botanical gardens too.
They are great stories Hanlin and Soane. You are both working very hard at story writing time - thinking of great ideas to write about and interesting words to use.
Well done, both of you.
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